Auren : better image/ more story ideas

NEXT: OK like during a few days before his 16th birthday, he has been feeling wierd and having strange dreams. he's in a very dark place, hearing voices he feels like he heard before. later on in his 4th dream he sees people and at first its like what we saw at the beginning of the story, but after the a bit the person is actually talking to him and telling him to endure a difficult task and other stuff. He wakes up on his b-day, and later when his dad(foster parent) brings the cake out and he blows the candles he is suddenly in a lot of pain and his fur starts to darken and his eyes start to go red. after a minute of screaming he faints and wakes up the next morning feeling very different.

well so far so good i'll think of more when i have the time. just hope my team mates will agree to this story so far, cause this is pure gold awesome.